Changes to be made to the first edition

Front cover

I will be changing the image in the background of the front cover to an image where George is looking at the lense as this show more confidence and makes the rerader more involoved with the cover. I will be adding more text and information to make it look more proffesional and not so empty.

Double Page spread

I will be editing the picture on this page to get it to look more realistic and to change the contrast so that the background isnt so bright. I will add a banner down the bottom of the page that will contain more smaller images of goerge in various positions to give the reader my audionce a more intimate realationship with the artist when they are reading the magazine.

Contents page

I will be adding more page informatiopn to the contents page to give a more realistic feel to the layout of the magazine and I will also add some images that realate to this text and will edit these so that they blend in with the backgound and dont look like seperate images.

Once all of these changes are made and the second version is complete I will post this version onto the blog and then add and edit this edition to get the final version and comlpeted product.